While the writing was good it wasn't enough plot action to sink the reader's minds into the characters actions.
Why on Earth did Cate allow her ex spouse to move in with her when she herself struggles to make a living?
Why did Cate go chasing after a dead end lesbian relationship?
Why allow contact with a married ex girlfriend?
Why take on a job that won't fulfill the character's strongest points and lead nowhere?
It seems the main plot point is left behind for far too long and readers may find this a slow burn even with good writing skills attached.
Thank you to Carol, NetGalley, Amazon Kindle for this ARC in exchange for this honest review.
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